The main topic of discussion for the
session held on October 20th, 2022, was sentence fluency and
conventions. Based on my previous knowledge of sentence fluency and conventions,
I understand that it is a writer’s intentional and purposeful use of sentences
to convey meaning and intent. When I think of conventions, the above quote
comes to mind, as punctuation makes a big difference. Revisiting this topic as a
teacher in training reaffirmed my understanding of the importance of mechanics
and fluency.
Although my recollection is
correct, in my opinion, it is succinct. Stemming from the session, I understand
that sentence fluency and conventions entail more, for instance, it incorporates
sentence variety whether short or long, simple, compound or complex sentences
as it encompasses a range of complexities. Ideally, it brings out the writer’s
voice. What particularly stuck with me was that sentence fluency and convention
is the trait we listened for. To me, this indicates that literacy encompasses many other elements of literary
arts in addition to reading and writing alone such as, listening and speaking that are often overlooked. Therefore,
in covering this session, I was reminded that mood, expression, readability,
rhythm and cadence are equally important in conveying messages of intent. For
this purpose, it is vital for us as teachers to provide every opportunity and
practice for learners to interact with different genres of writing and
different complexities in sentences. Similarly, it is equally important that we
model writing and reading to show students what is expected. In this way,
students will become familiar and comfortable with different texts. Furthermore,
exposing learners to environmental print such as newspaper ads, podcasts,
articles, etc., increases students’ familiarity.
As a child, I vividly recall
partaking in numerous screenplays when I was in elementary school. Prior to
learning my assigned role or character, my teachers would assume different roles
and read the script aloud. This was modelling. This was an attempt to convey
how they expected the participants to read and perform the piece. This vital
aspect was confirmed during the session when the instructor reiterated the
importance of reading aloud. An example that was shared during the session was
the choral/chorus reading. In addition to the teacher modelling reading, I particularly
like choral reading because it allows all students to engage in reading. Although
some students might use group reading to shield behind others, choral
reading also serves as model reading and it provides practice and support for
readers at all levels.
In our class discussion, the
instructor shared some useful literacy activities that I can incorporate into
my instruction that can be beneficial in my effort to create a student-centred learning environment. Such activities include scrambling sentences, having students correctly put them in order, and rewriting stories. In
the process, introducing and using proofreading symbols and having students
peer edit each other’s work can be engaging.
Finally, it is my endeavour to make
every effort to support students along their educational journey, whether I
remain as an Information Communications Technology (ICT) teacher or a mainstream classroom teacher. As students progress, gradually releasing
responsibilities will propel them to take ownership of their work and encourage
self-monitoring and self-reflection as they undertake different tasks and transfer
knowledge across curriculums.

Hey Sandra!
ReplyDeleteI must say that when it comes to sentence fluency and conventions such as punctuations, I overthink where the placement of punctuation marks like commas should go in sentences. I personally blame my innate ability to speak very quickly without taking breaths in sentences, because I vaguely remember my teachers in Primary school expressing that the easiest way to know how to place punctuations is by listening to the way you speak and the way the words expressed will be said. At this moment, I have to freely advertise applications such as Grammarly which has saved my life when I have assignments and essays to submit, and I have to make sure that my sentences are surely fluent with little to no grammatical errors.
I also recall in many choir sessions when singing in the Anguilla National Choir, the director would throw a fit if we breathed in the wrong spots. She would always give us a quick lesson about the importance in punctuations in sentences and the damaging effect it can have when pausing in the wrong areas (where there are no commas) or ignoring the commas which results in us possibly losing our breath when it comes to singing upcoming notes that should be held for a long time.
I do appreciate the listed activities that you've mentioned. Coming from a musical background like yourself, I love to find ways to incorporate songs into learning. Music helped me learn a lot of information in school. In this sense, I think that we can use well known verses from songs and write them on the board with no punctuations and have the class sing the song, and together point out where the missing punctuations should go and why. This would be a great activity to engage all students in a classroom discussion.
(N.B. please overlook any improper uses of conventions in this comment) XD
Hi Breanna
DeleteThanks for sharing your experience with the choir director. I have a group of students who are not shy to sing. I will now use singing as a strategy to teach punctuation or to highlight the importance of having and using punctuation in order to breathe or pause in the right places for each sentence or stanza in song. Very interesting!
Good Luck!!! Let me know if it works!
DeleteBreanna, I chuckled a bit when I read your response. Did you use Grammarly before actually submitting this post? Lololololol, but in all honesty, I can totally relate to the importance of observing punctuation while singing. Thank you for bringing this to mind! Generally, speaking, as long as we are using words, punctuation is necessary!
Delete@Jeneva. I wholeheartedly support your idea of using singing as a strategy to help in their learning of punctuation.
DeleteHi Sandra,
ReplyDeleteI have used the funny quote, “Let’s eat grandma! Let’s eat, grandma!” to introduce a language lesson on punctuation, with focus on commas. It sure was catching for them and they immediately understood and appreciated the importance of commas. I can’t agree with you more that punctuation sure makes a difference and as stated in your picture, “Punctuation saves lives.” The latter as it pertains to saving lives, also made me think of my experience in the law firm where a keen eye had to be used for fluency and conventions. It surely stressed that people's lives were at stake and we had to be scrupulous with fluency and conventions.
I am not sure I am understanding what you are referring to as being succinct. This caught my attention because I know in a previous class, I was told to try to be succinct when writing. I would be happy to learn more of this if it relates to this practice.
Thanks for the reminder about using newspaper ads and articles in the classroom. In my view, these could help students connect how fluency and conventions in literacy are important, needed and used in the real world. I consider this a reminder because we usually have to search the internet for stories that have the word, sentence or text level text needed. However, what would be a better resource than a text students can connect with based on what is happening in reality and better yet, around them.
I too can remember when I participated in plays and recited recitation for our church programs. Our instructors also modeled how they expected us to speak. In addition, I am recalling when I attended my very first choral speaking competition and I must say in both the skits and choral speaking, the performers surely put the icing on the cake to bring out the 6 + 1 traits of writing and the importance of conventions. These activities are perfect examples to share and appreciate reading and many, if not all aspects of literacy - I must say.
The suggestions to use scrambling sentences, rearranging sentences and rewriting stories are useful strategies that I can currently utilise in my classroom to help students understand how they can compose a paragraph. In fact, I intend to use the latter this week to have my students rewrite the ending of a story and peer edit their paragraphs. I am anxious to see and hear their suggestions to each other. I have also printed some proofreading marks to share with them and hope they would be able to understand and follow them.
Thank you for your comment Jeneva! In reference to my use of the word "succinct" in the following sentence, "Although my recollection is correct, in my opinion, it is succinct" I was simply referring to my narrow, prior understanding and explanation of what fluency and convention really are. If you reread, perhaps you will see that I expressed my prior knowledge and understanding of both terms and subsequently shared more elements of said terms since the session. Ideally, this allowed me to merge my existing knowledge with new knowledge to generate a more comprehensive understanding. I trust that this helps.
ReplyDeleteOn another note, thank you for bringing up your experience with Chorale speaking. Initiatives such as this can be a great opportunity for students to hear oral presentations that directly utilise the traits especially relative to sentence fluency, conventions, voice and organization. What is more, thinking of the recently concluded inter-primary school debates provided another great opportunity to expose students. In examples such as this, in addition to the above-mentioned traits, debates can also bring to light ideas and word choice.
Finally, I am curious to know if you actually did use one of the strategies in your lesson and if so, how did it go?
Hi Sandra, now that my students had the chance to rearrange sentences on Wednesday and rewrite the ending of a story yesterday, I must report. They seemed to have grasped both concepts as they completed the tasks fairly well.
ReplyDeleteTo help them to keep in sequence when changing the ending of the story, I provided them with the hamburger template found on google. (Research it!) Then, I helped them with writing complete sentences for each layer in their burger. In doing so, I was able to introduce the proofreading marks (one - on -one) which they seemed to follow/understand when rewriting a second draft in another hamburger template. The next step is to have them compile their sentence to form a paragraph and peer edit. I trust this will be satisfactory, as well.